I just wrote my first ever poem there? whats it like? :L?

For your first time, this is great! I love the background story and moral, except... Maybe you could change the 'peasy' part, because it doesn't fit in with the seriousness of the rest of the poem. And 'a bright silhouette' is kinda contradicting itself, because a silhouette is dark... So maybe you could change that a bit. But anyways, the poem was lovely, and inspirational, good job. :)